Sunday 3 May 2015

Hi, I'm Donna and this week I am posting this photo which I took on an iPhone5s a few months ago in Ireland. I love photography and taking photos. Please comment below on what you think of this photo, What could I improve on? and what I did well. Thank you

4 comments:

  1. Hey Donna! I'm Kelly Kim from Xiamen International School. I really love this photo you took and it's really summer-y:) I think this would be a great picture for your own personal blog like tumblr or instagram:D I really love the background and the focus on the drink. But to improve maybe you can make the drink not-tilted, and make sure the whole straw is in the picture:D but i really think it is a good picture:D

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  2. Hey Donna! I'm Kelly Kim from Xiamen International School. I really love this photo you took and it's really summer-y:) I think this would be a great picture for your own personal blog like tumblr or instagram:D I really love the background and the focus on the drink. But to improve maybe you can make the drink not-tilted, and make sure the whole straw is in the picture:D but i really think it is a good picture:D

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  3. Donna, I love your photo! I love how you blurred the background, also the positive space/object of the photo is amazing. My only suggestion for you would be to remove the water droplets at the top; because I fell that they are glaring a little. But, this is still one of the best photos I have seen that was taken by a student. Awesome job!

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  4. Hi Donna, I love the picture you took, the background and the contrast enphasises the slushie. I agree with Jessie T., the water droplet distract the focus but this is still a great photo. Why did you take the photo?

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